Not bad at all
A really stylized movie with some great fbf.
However, the story.plot of this piece is really lacking, and the main character is a 'cliche' hero' at best. However, the characters and how they looked look really good, which wasn't just hard-core anime, but a bit more serious, just how I like it.
the music got a bit repetative, but overall, everything looked pretty good. Some animation segments, such as the walking and the opening of the door looked kinda lame, but the shading and the backgrounds (and characters) looked really well done.
I stilll didn't quite understand what had happened, and overall, that hurt this piece. No voices was well used with something like this, but when you make no real connection with the character in any way, and it feels like you've sene that character before, it's just not the same.
But this really looks like it could go somewhere. the crow animation in the beginning looked great, and I'm glad you made such a serious piece. keep up the great work, and work with story a bit more. I know it's the first episode, so I won't be too critical, but do your best to really establish this as something that's better than the rest.
best of luck, and good work.
excellent shading.